14th January, 2006

The Distance

Are you laughing
While I cry?
Are you meeting people
While I say goodbye?

Is the sun shining?
Does it look like rain?
Can you feel my emptiness?
Can you sense my pain?

Are you laying in bed,
Dreaming your cares away?
While I rise to greet the sun,
And face another day?

Is the love we have,
Still in existance?
Or did we lose it all
Through the distance..?

Posted at 12:03 am |


19 Comments

  1. LaiaLy_q8 said:

    very very nice

    did you write it ?

    January 14, 2006 at 12:31 am

  2. MSB said:

    laialy: thanks.. yes

    January 14, 2006 at 1:44 am

  3. Hussa-G said:

    Nicely done. Mashalah very good. Allah ehnesh.

    January 14, 2006 at 1:07 pm

  4. MSB said:

    thanx Hussa-G.. Allah ye5aleech :)

    January 14, 2006 at 1:11 pm

  5. Baroque said:

    wow!
    sounds like a love ballad..
    i like it!

    January 14, 2006 at 9:46 pm

  6. 7tenths said:

    Yeah we lost it :P

    January 15, 2006 at 1:14 am

  7. KJB said:

    Lak teslam le hal anamel el zahabia ele 3am toktob hal ash3aar ;)

    January 15, 2006 at 6:05 am

  8. MSB said:

    7tenths: afa… laish 3ad?? GO STUDY! :|

    kjb: welcome.. waiting on ur blog.. when r u gonna get around to it???

    January 15, 2006 at 6:26 am

  9. KJB said:

    Me? Blog? MSB you didn’t leave anything for me to write about :):):) j/k - soon inshallah - i’ll keep you posted

    January 15, 2006 at 6:30 am

  10. pinkbling said:

    nice poem!

    January 15, 2006 at 10:04 am

  11. DareDevil said:

    Interesting post

    January 15, 2006 at 2:03 pm

  12. MSB said:

    kjb: 3an el 3ayarah!

    pinkbling: teslemeen… thank u!

    daredevil: thank u and welcome..

    3atham Allah ajerkom ya sha3b el Kuwait

    January 15, 2006 at 7:26 pm

  13. TANTALIZE said:

    Yes!

    January 16, 2006 at 6:48 pm

  14. ZinZinQ8 said:

    Very sweet MSB…

    January 16, 2006 at 8:48 pm

  15. adaydreamer said:

    nice… very nice…. allah ye5eth aldistance that makes ppl “forget” each other…… :(

    January 17, 2006 at 1:35 am

  16. MSB said:

    charisma: sorry tawni mentabha ineh i never responded to ur comment! :| thank u o good luck on ur exams! :)

    tantalize: yes to the last question?

    zinzinq8: min thoqech.. waiting on part VII, VIII and IX ;)

    adaydreamer: ee w’Allah!! bs i dont blame it on the distance.. :/

    January 17, 2006 at 6:02 am

  17. Q8Prodigy said:

    very touching…

    January 17, 2006 at 6:36 am

  18. Baroque said:

    ishda3wa ;)
    anywayz is there a story behind this dramatic yet utterly romantic post?

    hmmm.. care to share ? ;P

    January 17, 2006 at 4:28 pm

  19. MSB said:

    q8prodigy: thank u

    charisma: sorry to disappoint u.. no story at all! :) just felt like writing..

    January 20, 2006 at 1:07 am

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